Open Poetry #12 |
I know |
Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
I know someone will love me for who I am and who I could be. Until that day I will patiently wait. For fools rush in and deserve their fate. I know somebody will see the woman inside who yearns to be free. I'll know it's him when his eyes meet mine. We'll be perfectly matched just like rhythm and rhyme. He'll love me for more than the sway of my hips. He'll enjoy my mind as much as my kiss. He'll hold me tight when I feel out of control and when I need to be free he'll loosen his hold. And I may be dreamin' but let me dream on. I know I'll meet him before too long. |
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Brian Beaudry Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 57Northern Ontario Canada |
You know what you're looking for and it's all the right things Angel!! Beautiful poem of hope and promise!!! Brian |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Tennessee Angel - a very tender writing, and you will meet him, just keep writing like this. BC |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'He'll hold me tight when I feel out of control and when I need to be free he'll loosen his hold. And I may be dreamin' but let me dream on.' Yes, that's right, you wait for the man who's right for you!! Great write, TA! I enjoyed this! sp do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very tender and sweet... and wise! *S* Well done! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Yes, he will... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
that day is coming Angel. . . wonderful. . . welcome back. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
And yes you will know who he is... when your eyes meet it will be electricfying .... : -) |
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