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Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03
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Tennessee

0 posted 2001-03-05 08:26 PM


I know
someone will love me
for who I am
and who I could be.
Until that day
I will patiently wait.
For fools rush in
and deserve their fate.
I know
somebody will see
the woman inside
who yearns to be free.
I'll know it's him
when his eyes meet mine.
We'll be perfectly matched
just like rhythm and rhyme.
He'll love me for more
than the sway of my hips.
He'll enjoy my mind
as much as my kiss.
He'll hold me tight
when I feel out of control
and when I need to be free
he'll loosen his hold.
And I may be dreamin'
but let me dream on.
I know I'll meet him
before too long.



© Copyright 2001 Stacy - All Rights Reserved
Brian Beaudry
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since 2001-03-03
Posts 57
Northern Ontario Canada
1 posted 2001-03-05 08:40 PM


You know what you're looking for and it's all the right things Angel!! Beautiful poem of hope and promise!!!
Brian

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2001-03-05 08:40 PM


Tennessee Angel - a very tender writing, and you will meet him, just keep writing like this.

BC

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
3 posted 2001-03-05 08:50 PM


'He'll hold me tight
when I feel out of control
and when I need to be free
he'll loosen his hold.
And I may be dreamin'
but let me dream on.'

Yes, that's right, you wait for the man who's right for you!! Great write, TA! I enjoyed this!

sp


do I believe we'd be better off apart?
can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

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Louisiana
4 posted 2001-03-06 11:03 AM


Very tender and sweet... and wise! *S* Well done!
Lady In White
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5 posted 2001-03-06 11:14 AM


Yes, he will...
Sven
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6 posted 2001-03-06 01:08 PM


that day is coming Angel. . .

wonderful. . . welcome back. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
7 posted 2001-03-06 01:14 PM


And yes you will know who he is...
when your eyes meet it will be electricfying .... : -)

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