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ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

0 posted 2001-03-04 06:17 PM

Reflections

It was one year ago today; you and I met in person.
Never did I think we would end this way.
There are so many things, I want to tell you, that you won't let me say
I've talked to you, for the past few days…in all honesty, I have not lied.
Then I say something and you take it out of context, ending what may have been rebuilt.
Ours was a perfect love, one made in heaven
One of intense desire and passion
I know that I can no longer be near you because you don't want me to be
You claim that it is best for you and you don't need a liar in your life
This honest truth I shall speak now…these are the last words you will ever me say
I will love you for all eternity.

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

1 posted 2001-03-04 06:45 PM

So sad..
But on a positive note,
A great poem..

~*Peachy Be*~

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

2 posted 2001-03-04 06:51 PM

I can only say: you speak your heart, and that is NEVER wrong.

And my compliments to you

AT

"Truth in this gray-marred, subjective world, may be defined as intent. Truth, then is one thing, the Intent to Conceal Nothing."

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-03-04 06:53 PM

Sad to reflect and all we can see is someone we still care for yet have lost...James

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-03-05 01:12 PM

reflections can be hard to see. . .

wonderful. . . but sad. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-03-05 01:18 PM

Very sad, very real. Good job, Laura.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

6 posted 2001-03-05 01:27 PM

Heart-breaking...

...and I have found a lifetime can be lived in one moment...

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

7 posted 2001-03-05 07:39 PM

A very sad poem...brilliant write!

Nathan

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

8 posted 2001-03-06 01:47 PM

Thank you to everyone who responded...it means alot to me.

~Laura~

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