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Quiet Questions |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Quiet Questions May I sit At your knee To pass the time Listen to your Words of Rhyme Sit among The daffodils Thrilling See the bee To flower Willing May we garner Moments Treasured May we love Only Forever May we of Moments Speak In the twilight Might we Seek May I have This dance With you A forever Moment Of two |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
I like this, nice. bernie Bernie Slicker |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
What beautiful and content images. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So soft, so beautiful. ~thank you~ *s* Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'May I have This dance With you A forever Moment Of two' Beautifully written...I love this!! sp  do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Laconic and softly expressed. Well done. Poeminister |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you all for your thoughtful replies... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a beautiful poem, I would suggest question marks after the questions, gives the reader the full import. The lovely words flowed very well!! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lady in White, This is so tenderly written, I enjoyed it very much, thank you, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
A forever Moment Of two Strange how just yesterday I was questioning the length of a moment without having read your beautiful words yet ~Smiling at the beauty of your words Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare |
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