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jellybeans
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0 posted 2001-03-05 01:32 PM


Carnivore

wearily I withdraw, my movements empowered
by the biting realization that no matter
how much pleasure you are fed
it will not sate your need
to control
© Copyright 2001 jellybeans - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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1 posted 2001-03-05 01:50 PM

ouch!!



perfectly phrased
perfectly succinct
jellybeans
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2 posted 2001-03-05 02:48 PM

thanks doreen, i know some of mine are 'you have to have been there' to understand them, and yep, i know you have been...thank you
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3 posted 2001-03-06 10:47 AM

Nope... the feeding frenzy just continues...

And you know I hate this... the situation, not the poem. *S* I hope the weariness abates and the empowerment grows stronger... for you deserve being engorged with love, not sapped empty of hope.
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