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Perfect Sunset
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Perfect Sunset |
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Kerri S Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 61Rhode Island |
Bask in the sunset as the breeze caresses your skin listen to the ocean let it consume you within reflect on the day as you sit side by side stop and take a moment, watch the birds fly on by take joy in the closeness that we two can share, when there are no words to fill the air Kerri |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
serene and sweet very nice ! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautiful images here, Kerri! I really like this! sp  do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Just enjoying that closeness can say more than words can ever express...I really enjoyed the scene here....good work!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very pretty... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very peaceful scene you've painted here....it was a breeze to read your poem....fabulous write! Nathan |
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Kerri S Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 61Rhode Island |
I am happy that you all enjoyed reading this poem. Ethome you are very right. So much can be said between two people even with out the use of words. Kerri |
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