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Kerri S
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since 1999-06-08
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Rhode Island

0 posted 2001-03-05 10:06 AM



Bask in the sunset
as the breeze caresses
your skin

listen to the ocean
let it consume you
within

reflect on the day
as you sit side by
side

stop and take a
moment, watch the
birds fly on by

take joy in the
closeness that we
two can share,
when there are no
words to fill the air

Kerri

© Copyright 2001 Kerri Souza - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2001-03-05 10:12 AM


serene and sweet very nice !
snowpants
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KS
2 posted 2001-03-05 04:51 PM


Beautiful images here, Kerri! I really like this!

sp


do I believe we'd be better off apart?
can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2001-03-05 04:54 PM


Just enjoying that closeness can say more than words can ever express...I really enjoyed the scene here....good work!!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-03-05 04:54 PM


Very pretty...
Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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Georgia, Fulton
5 posted 2001-03-05 07:37 PM


A very peaceful scene you've painted here....it was a breeze to read your poem....fabulous write!

Nathan

Kerri S
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 61
Rhode Island
6 posted 2001-03-06 10:59 AM


I am happy that you all enjoyed reading this poem.

Ethome you are very right. So much can be said between two people even with out the use of words.



Kerri

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