Open Poetry #12 |
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reality...reasons...reactions |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
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reality...reasons...reactions Camel on bended knee scratching and clawing at her ears helps not the cruel unfair words once spoken can never be unheard not today she whimpers not again she sobs with Intent they heap as she falls to bended knee Heavenward she weeps ` ` ` I am overfull swollen debris laden flood waters flow swiftly from my eyes and you unwisely pick this moment to launch your own tributary into my path one look at the raging water should alert that you must redirect I cannot manage your sadness too ` ` ` motivation I guess God knew just what he was doing when he entrusted this grandma with the most pure of heart smile you have ever seen in a kid's size seven and a half shoe [This message has been edited by jellybeans (edited 03-05-2001).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Jellybeans.... Speaking as a grandma, this was terrific!!! I loved the ending, and it's going back to the top!!! ![]() Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The first two seem to speak of all that overloads us and leaves us broken... while the third gives thanks for the reasons we rise and try again. *S* These are great, jb.... well done! *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 03-06-2001).] |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thanks sunny ![]() suthern.....sigh.....thank you lady ![]() |
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