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My Everything |
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Kerri S Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 61Rhode Island |
When the roads don't always take you where you want to go when the lands always seem so far away look to me for guidance, look to me for strength I am the one who shine's down from above I am the moon, the stars and the sky, I am your sun your earth your air You are my child for whom I adore, you are my air my earth my sky, you are my stars and my moon, you are my world as precious to me as the air I breath My one true wish for eternity to hold you, to love you to comfort and to share you, with whom one day you will find and make an eternity just like mine I wrote this poem for my three precious little girls I do hope you all enjoy it. Kerri [This message has been edited by Kerri S (edited 03-05-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kerri, welcome to Passions! Your daughters will treasure this as they grow older...and until then, I hope you continue to read and post here at Passions. Perhaps your daughters will take after you, and join us when the time is right to write! Please check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Kerri S Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 61Rhode Island |
Thank you Sunshine for your very kind words. My girls are my greatest treasure as all children should be. I am sure they will join us here at Passions for poetry is love Kerri |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I so enjoyed the tenderness, the lovingness of this piece. In the first stanza, I had a little difficulty with following as the line breaks seemed to break us the flow. What about: When the roads don't always take you w(h)ere you want to go when the lands always seem so far away look to me for guidance, look to me for strength I am the one who shine's down from above I am the moon, the stars and the sky, I am your sun your earth your air |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Your words have much warmth, comfort and love...James |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Your darling daughters are lucky to have a mother who openly shares her love with them. As they see you enjoying poetry so shall they. Welcome to the family. |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
well, I sure loved it, I have three daughters myself, and one is named Kerry. great words here. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautiful first post, Kerri! Welcome to Passions! sp  do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Welecome. and those are by far very lucky girls! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. Such a beautiful poem to join us with....I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
It is a beautiful tribute to your three. Long years of happiness embrace all of thee. AT "Truth in this gray-marred, subjective world, may be defined as intent. Truth, then is one thing, the Intent to Conceal Nothing." |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Know the feeling... have two of my own... welcome to Passions. |
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Kerri S Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 61Rhode Island |
Thank you all very much for your kind words. Passions is like a second home to me now, and I look forward to opening my heart as I read all of your wonderful poems. Vas I do believe you are right about the line breaks, and I thank you for pointing it out to me. Be well everyone Love Kerri |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Kerri, This is lovely so enjoyed and welcome to Passions I hope you enjoy your stay, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Kerri S Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 61Rhode Island |
Thank you Cerenity. I know I will enjoy my time here everyone is so very kind. Kerri |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such love shines through... welcome to Passions! |
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Kerri S Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 61Rhode Island |
Thank you Suthern I am very happy to be here.  Kerri |
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