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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-03-05 10:51 AM


Cats
Virginia Salter

One cat, two cats,
three cats, four

clawing at
the patio door

Striped ones,
hyped ones,
ones that
slash your nerves

Gray ones,
white ones,
ones with
elan, verve!

Mousers,
pouncers,
cats that
meow and hiss.

Crazy ones,
loony ones,
ones you want
to dis.

Where does one find them?
Then what does one do?
When you want to get away
from this wild, crazy zoo?

© March 5, 2001

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2001-03-05 12:04 PM


Hey Virginia - this is great!

Gray ones,
white ones,
ones with
elan, verve!

I love that...very well done.

Thanks for the smiles

K

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
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2 posted 2001-03-05 12:13 PM


HAHAHA, loved this one vas ~ definitely know the feeling....'cept it's dogs! Bonnie
Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19
Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind
3 posted 2001-03-06 09:54 PM


The poem is great!
And Fun to read!


~*Peachy Be*~

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

4 posted 2001-03-06 10:08 PM


VAS... meowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
I thought your write on 'cats' was just tooooooooooo cute sweetie...
I really enjoyed this purrrrrrrrrrfect rhyme about those domestic felines
And I thank you for the gigglesNsmiles this brought to me tonite...
~coco~


wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
5 posted 2001-03-06 10:11 PM


Miss Vas this is one cool cat yuh
VAS
Member Rara Avis
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Oregon
6 posted 2001-03-07 01:05 AM


Thank you all!!! You have certainly added to the fun I've had with this piece! So glad you stopped in to read and comment.
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7 posted 2001-03-07 02:55 PM


In my own home, I face defeat -
All votes are cast by pairs of feet! *G*

Thanks for the grins! *S*

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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Georgia, Fulton
8 posted 2001-03-07 02:57 PM


What a fun write...wonderful!!

Nathan

JCGF
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since 2001-01-19
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MA
9 posted 2001-03-07 04:31 PM


I LAUGHED my _ _ _ off! Good one. Too funny. Thank you so much for the laugh. I really enjoyed this one. Then again, I enjoy everything you write.

Hugs,
Tammy

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