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An Angel's Pace
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An Angel's Pace |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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An Angel's Pace I've lived many ways throughout my lifetime Though at different speeds I ran I now move along leaving a warm like breeze And, at times I live on patience land... I steal the identity of courage's pace So, I walk without the tears You give me wonder to what lies ahead in gold That's where I stayed for all these years... You take greed from my selfish heart Then I walk reality's pace Along it's sides is where I try to be So, I can witness sunset's face... The world is what you offer to me You give light when my night is dark I quickly move hours through wandering's pace And, slide on rays to reach your heart You take hate and leave it with a kinder pace There is where we find new ground Oh, how you take my guilt for you to carry yourself Making way to where a thankful pace is found... I know happy and I know hunger I know beautiful and lies But, always you take my pain to the rain And, give shelter to my tear-filled eyes... I love the pace of love when your path's cross mine I give praise to that sadness you take Throughout the days I look to meet you, My Friend For I have flown and angel's pace... Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
'You take hate and leave it with a kinder pace There is where we find new ground' This piece is very nice and hopeful. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I love the pace of love when your path's cross mine I give praise to that sadness you take Throughout the days I look to meet you, My Friend For I have flown and angel's pace...' Beautiful write, Sauni! I really enjoyed this! sp  do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Saunni, This was lovely you have been blessed with someone like that in your life, very much enjoyed the poetry, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ 'I love the pace of love when your path's cross mine' Lovely thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
How smooth...James |
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