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poertyman2002
Junior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 32
Florida, US

0 posted 2001-03-05 05:31 PM


For where art my savior?
For where art my friends?
For where shall they be until the end?
With me I hope,
Close to me please,
For then I lie down,
With plenty of ease.
For finally I have found,
A place a room a living ground,
Where I can live and see the fun,
With friends represented by everyone.

© Copyright 2001 Brian Gold - All Rights Reserved
jellybeans
Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298

1 posted 2001-03-05 05:32 PM


nice........sigh...like this well sort of...I mean i like the writing, just don't like the seeing everyone thing...that can bite....course hope you don't ever run into that
poertyman2002
Junior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 32
Florida, US
2 posted 2001-03-05 05:34 PM


jelly- do u have aim or anything so we can talk?
Tony Abbot
Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209
North Wales,UK
3 posted 2001-03-05 05:35 PM


Nice poem.Thanks,I enjoyed it.
Tennessee Angel
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 661
Tennessee
4 posted 2001-03-05 07:37 PM


Very nice write. Look forward to reading more from you.
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