Open Poetry #12 |
Lover Hidden in The Mist |
Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Take my hand softly, see love in my eyes. Gently caress me, passionately lips meet, touch is sensual. Breath quickens, then a knock. Dream disappears, now stark reality. Until next time my lover, hidden in the mist. Red-uni © 03/01 |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
The distance between dreams and reality.......I have lately been contemplating this. You've expressed this beautifully in few words. Not easily done. Have really enjoyed your writing! "Success is going from failure to failure without losing enthusiasm." ~Winston Churchill~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Can relate to this...excellent write. Poeminister |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Whew...such intensity in so few lines! I enjoyed this! sp do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done! the scene is well painted with few words....welcome to Passions!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
AH HA! I KNEW it had to be here somewhere! I enjoyed it! Keep writing! |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
I really like this poem.....great job! |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
Simply Beautiful! I loved it!! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Red, Too bad it was only a dream, but, a good one. Melton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very R&J....well done! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, well done, hidden in the mist, I like that Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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