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Open Poetry #12

My World (Senryu, for you)

ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

0 posted 2001-03-04 07:02 PM

My world spins so round
not knowing tomorrow yet
I am here this song

"Time is nothing
Space is nothing
Breath comes and goes
Only Souls Live
Now and forevermore"

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-03-04 07:07 PM

thoughtful and interesting......I like it

SEA

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

2 posted 2001-03-04 07:18 PM

Thank you.

When all the years and words of knowing, real or supposed: I shall be, what I have always been, a simply melody, hoping to grow into a song.

Again thank you. This was not entirely easy.

Be Well
AT

"Truth in this gray-marred, subjective world, may be defined as intent. Truth, then is one thing, the Intent to Conceal Nothing."

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-03-04 07:39 PM

Ok, so you can do miniatures. If you can do it in words....you can do it in paint. You really need to let others here know your sense of humor-----it's great and such a needed (though, God forbid, not mindless)----relief. Anybody else wish he would just speak english? Love ya, AT. ----RJ

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-03-04 08:00 PM

Wonderful senryu...well done.

Poeminister

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

5 posted 2001-03-04 08:00 PM

Neat...
Very well done!

~*Peachy Be*~

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