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Meet Me In The Clouds
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Meet Me In The Clouds |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Meet Me In The Clouds Meet me in the Clouds where angels soar under the gazing stars- they'll be our dance floor At highest stratum where time stands still where all things flow by our supernal will Meet me in the clouds where dreams stretch bridgeing from one to another where all ends touch Lets go in the starlight to a heavenly height Won't you meet me in the clouds in the clouds tonight Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 03-04-2001).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beautiful and nostalgic, something divine to dance to. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
PM~ this is enchanting........  SEAIf I let you into my heart..... will you promise to stay? ~Sue~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Poeminister, Lovely thoughts and writing. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sir, you are stretching, and most beautifully....thank you... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a beautiful dance in the clouds.....I agree with SEA this was very enchanting... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
wow, wow, and wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! take my breath away.... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I can only echo those before me...this is divine...I'd love to dance with you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Meet me in the Clouds where angels soar under the gazing stars- they'll be our dance floor ================ bridgeing from one to another where all ends touch Lets go in the starlight to a heavenly height Won't you meet me in the clouds in the clouds tonight ============= lovely celestial images laced with a melodic cadence... a poetic combination creating a harmony... well done poet sir It's amazing how you make your face just like a wall how you take your heart and turn it off how I turn my head and lose it all MB20 |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Poeminister, I really enjoy your poetry simply beautiful and a challenge well met, having to save this one for future reads, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
very nice words... so dreamy something that i need ..WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR [img]file://A:\hearts1.gif[/img] |
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