Open Poetry #12 |
When Sleep Pulls---my attempt at my phrase challenge |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
When Sleep Pulls Virginia Salter Sleep drags me by the eyelashes, upon a old braid rug the tongues of my shoes get fifty lashes for keeping toes from snug My lids keep slamming shut, as a player shoots right past, must be some sort of mind control, cuz mine has surely passed. © March 2, 2001 |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
LOL..cute!!! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like it |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Fun to read! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Glad you all enjoyed my mindless sleep induced drivel. |
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Kerri S Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 61Rhode Island |
Thanks Vas you have just pin pointed how I feel when it's time for bed. Very cute read Kerri |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Vas, This was a cute read and I think you met the challenge well, enjoy much, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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