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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Not yet is it over the passionate kisses Not yet is it over the way that she misses. Not yet has he given a reason for leaving Not yet has he given their love chance for healing. Not yet is goodbye true though they're so far apart Not yet is goodbye true while he lives in her heart. He's not yet forgotten her love made of rainbows She's not yet forgotten his love, which he won't show. Not yet is he ready to forsake lips of wine Not yet is she ready to forsake love divine. Not yet and not ever will their love be denied Not yet and not ever though tonight she still cries... [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 03-03-2001).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sandra love, utterly truly wonderful so full of feeling so well written. I love this one I really do Excellent work Take care love as always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Such sweet sentiments and sincerity expressed in this beautiful poem! Yes, it is not yet over, and true love will never fade! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Catalinamoon, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
on your shoulder is she crying? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Not yet, not ever... we should always remember... jwesley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
soon her tears will dry. . . wonderful Sandra. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sandra......my friend......now it's my turn to cry......beautiful and haunting...... Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes catwoman I understand the not yet's...James |
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Brian Beaudry Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 57Northern Ontario Canada |
Sandra, this poem pulls at the heart strings, and yes, love, which gifts such joy, can also deal great pain.Thanks for steering me her dear friend!! Another great poem!! |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, I can relate to this in so many ways. Your words say it all..."Not Yet". Beautiful! KTDA Love, Elise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very beautiful and very sad... well done! |
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