Open Poetry #12 |
Trying To Paint |
ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Trying to paint a seascape a miniature just something I do yet the horizon will not meet the sea nor will any ships sail here Just something I used to know how to do "The days are razors. They slice me in to pieces unidentifiable, unsuitable for human viewing." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ATelamon...you weave this so well, it tells of the many things you can still do.... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Somehow, the image of you doing anything in miniature...is very hard for me to conceive. Ha! BTW...still waiting on FedEx. |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
My thanks for your reading. Sunshine I speak what I see and am.I was something. I am unsure as to what I am now. JR it may surprise you that one of my perhaps too many avocations is the painting of miniatures. Yeah the big guy with his tiny figures. A picture no doubt amusing. I even sculpt the landscapes and dwellings of such. And if you want to laugh: some are so small they stand less tall, than the smallest knuckle on your little finger. Yes that is small. Again my thanks to your reading. And Fed-Ex is on the way. Tracking number 1121887346. AT "The days are razors. They slice me in to pieces unidentifiable, unsuitable for human viewing." [This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 03-04-2001).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Just something I used to know how to do' These few words just struck a chord with me, for some reason, AT...I must thank you for sharing this thought-provoking write today! Great write! sp do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Seems sometimes that our lives are filled with things we used to know how to do. Do we acknowledge them and move on or keep trying even when the ability has left us? A thought-provoking poem, sir. (perhaps I'm thinking of the two hamstrings I pulled playing baseball for the first time after a layoff of many years LOL) |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
interesting a pleasure to read.. ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I contemplate the things the ones I used to do with ease without a care and your poem has sent me there to the day of when but now a bright new day and time |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
An interesting composition, far more complex, I suspect, than its simple design. Thank you for it. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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