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| Open Poetry #12 |
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Passion's Star |
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Brian Beaudry Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 57Northern Ontario Canada |
Passion's Star Sitting at the window's edge Looking deep into the night Passion stirring in my heart Emotions that aren't right As I look into the night sky The stars are burning bright Each one, a white hot flame Of passions taking flight I wish upon the brightest Yes that one holds my soul For your arms to hold me Feel your charm's console Even if this love is wrong Its passion cons my mind Hiding thoughts of reason In dark spaces I can't find Its blinking seems to wink To me with promises of lust Intensity of burning desire Has needs become a must Come to me by starlight Envelop me in your glow Take my face in your palms Watch the love tears flow In each tear is reflected The beauty of your light Tiny stars against the glass Giving luminance to night How many more like me Sitting wishing from afar For a love to set them free In flight of passion's star Brian Beaudry |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Here's your first post. I must have seen your post at the top last night. I though I was seeing your name at the very top of the page in the spot where forum monitor's names go. Well, it was late  Good write showing how passion, lust can muddy our vision and common sense. btw...that's NOT why I didn't see clearly where your name was last night  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Enjoyed the read, and we hope that you find many enjoyable moments here among fine poets...reading, writing, and getting to know us, as we get to know you! Check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Brian--Passion has a way of taking over, especially in the night. Enjoyed your poem and welcome to Passions, where lots stay up late at night writing and reading poetry. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
great big welcome to Passions. this is a wonderful entrance, leaving the reader wanting to see more. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Its blinking seems to wink To me with promises of lust Intensity of burning desire Has needs become a must Come to me by starlight Envelop me in your glow Take my face in your palms Watch the love tears flow In each tear is reflected The beauty of your light Tiny stars against the glass Giving luminance to night How many more like me Sitting wishing from afar For a love to set them free In flight of passion's star ================ Very well done poet sir. a poetic blend of intense emotions laced with celestial imagery, and kissed with perfect cadence. Welcome to Passions Brian ... so nice to have you here. I look forward to more of your work. take care jm Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
'It's passion cons my mind'...and what a sweet passion it is. Welcome! Enjoyed this alot! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent emotional writing...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Brian, welcome to Passions, and this is a superb first post for us. I can relate oh so well. Sandra |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you. Please join us in some of the discussion forums if you have chance. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Welecome... A great way to start it off! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Brian, Beautiful writing. The imagery is stunning. I felt like I was there next to you. Very well done. Welcome to Passions. I look forward to reading more of your work.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brian, Welcome and a very nice first write. |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
I enjoyed your post, welcome to Passions. I am new here and everyone has been so nice, I think you will enjoy these nice people. Red |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to our world Brain...and with such a great first write... |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Welcome, welcome... This was a pleasure to read. Thank you |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful entrance piece. Will be looking forward to reading more from you... take care, Poeminister |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Brian, Wonderful, WOW really loved this, and welcome to passions hope you enjoy your stay, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to passions, I like your flow and emotion very much! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Welcome to Passions... from another wishing one. *S* Great work! |
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