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No Goodbye Eyes
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No Goodbye Eyes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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No Goodbye Eyes* When the darkness of the night pulls the moonlight into gold, I'm torn between the innocence of words trapped in my hold. Reflections of my heart wants the images of love, a dreamstate to adhere to created from above. As time streams, past and futures and rainbows hue my days, the grays and shades of darkness, on whispered winds will stray. They take me to another land blending me in light, allowing mirrored thoughts of you to softly kiss, in spite. Naked passions, here in rest viewed shadows, next on wall. Reaching out to touch your shape, laced open for your call. Your eyes of deep, unmeasured, pierce sigh me to their meet as silkened paleness, overcomes my dreams on satin sheet. No goodbye eyes remain in mind, just those when moments show the loving looks that etched my heart, and stay, while you must go. ~Wynter * thank you Marsha for the inspiration and title "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-05-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What lovely sentiments...well done! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen love, this is utterly fabulous, and you made far better use of it than I did love. Absolutely first class writing, outstsnding work, and I love it of course Take care love as always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - I love the night, especially into the moonlight of golden thoughts. The below verse is most capturing. "When the darkness of the night pulls the moonlight into gold, I'm torn between the innocence of words trapped in my hold." BC |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
wynter~ *sighs* this is just so lovely! you got some really beautiful lines flowing throughout this...i say flowing cuz that's what this reminded me of... a gentle stream...very captivating! take care amy  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
really wonderful ...very lovely i liked it WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lady In White thank you ~Smiles Marsha You give me too much credit, I only get inspired by others ideas that are very creative...and so I must thank you again BC well you know me and that innocence of thought..one day it will get me into trouble I suspect.. Amy thank you, your responses perk up my mornings DreamLess I am so glad you enjoy my words {{hugzz}} ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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