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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-03-05 09:21 AM

No Goodbye Eyes*

When the darkness of the night pulls
the moonlight into gold,
I'm torn between the innocence
of words trapped in my hold.

Reflections of my heart wants
the images of love,
a dreamstate to adhere to
created from above.

As time streams, past and futures
and rainbows hue my days,
the grays and shades of darkness,
on whispered winds will stray.

They take me to another land
blending me in light,
allowing mirrored thoughts of you
to softly kiss, in spite.

Naked passions, here in rest
viewed shadows, next on wall.
Reaching out to touch your shape,
laced open for your call.

Your eyes of deep, unmeasured, pierce
sigh me to their meet
as silkened paleness, overcomes
my dreams on satin sheet.

No goodbye eyes remain in mind,
just those when moments show
the loving looks that etched my heart,
and stay, while you must go.

~Wynter * thank you Marsha for the inspiration and title

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-05-2001).]

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-03-05 09:32 AM

What lovely sentiments...well done!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2001-03-05 11:20 AM

Maureen love, this is utterly fabulous, and you made far better use of it than I did love. Absolutely first class writing, outstsnding work, and I love it of course
Take care love as always
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2001-03-05 09:37 PM

Wynter - I love the night, especially into the moonlight of golden thoughts. The below verse is most capturing.

"When the darkness of the night pulls
the moonlight into gold,
I'm torn between the innocence
of words trapped in my hold."

BC

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2001-03-06 12:55 PM

wynter~
*sighs* this is just so lovely!
you got some really beautiful lines
flowing throughout this...i say flowing
cuz that's what this reminded me of...
a gentle stream...very captivating!

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."

DreamLess
Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 92

5 posted 2001-03-06 04:16 AM

really wonderful ...very lovely
i liked it

WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL)
EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2001-03-06 07:46 AM

Lady In White
thank you ~Smiles

Marsha
You give me too much credit, I only get inspired by others ideas that are very creative...and so I must thank you again

BC
well you know me and that innocence of thought..one day it will get me into trouble I suspect..

Amy
thank you, your responses perk up my mornings

DreamLess
I am so glad you enjoy my words {{hugzz}}

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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