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Open Poetry #12

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NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

0 posted 2001-03-03 12:09 PM

my final gift...
your solitude

enjoy the calm
the quiet

so much like death
and worse, i think

but hey, you made
me buy it!

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-03-03 12:24 PM

short and not so sweet,
but well put

ouch!

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

2 posted 2001-03-03 01:20 AM

Now that's a hell-of-a shot!

I agree with Krawdad... short, but not so sweet.

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

3 posted 2001-03-03 07:52 AM

No wasted words here....packs a punch.

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