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Jeffrey Carter
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0 posted 2001-01-20 02:12 AM



Beth

Thank you for giving me
The smile that I had lost
To know you truly love me
Made it worth all the cost
Before that day we met
I was as sad as I could be
But you've made me so happy
My soul is flying free

I do what I can everyday
To make you feel my love
To let you know I appreciate
My angel from above
To show you just how special
I really think you are
I'd walk forever to find you
There is no place that far

A friend is a friend forever
That's how the saying goes
With me you can know that's true
Every day our friendship grows
I feel so much closer
To you every day
And, Beth, I don't ever
Want this feeling to go away


© Copyright 2001 Jeffrey D. Carter - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-01-20 05:54 AM


Jeffrey, good to see you!  Yes, a friend SHOULD be a friend forever!  Great!

Kathleen



Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-01-20 09:09 AM


What a beautiful tribute to this wonderful friendship you have ... lovely sentiments Jeffrey!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

dgvarner
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3 posted 2001-01-21 11:44 PM


very beautiful    how bout a hop to the top so more can read this  

hugs, g


"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to the point where we would think so..."

Rosebud1229
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4 posted 2001-01-21 11:53 PM


very nice, friendship is sacred.
redwriter1
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5 posted 2001-03-03 12:09 PM


Im glad you can say these things to so many people jeffrey. Shows true talent.

You can make love up as you go along.

And you do it so well.

Nice verse.

Aimster
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6 posted 2001-03-03 12:14 PM


jeff-

hi! its so wonderful to see you here
beautiful writing for an obviously very special
friend....this was just lovely, really enjoyed this.
and yes a friend is a friend forever, or at least most
times.

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


Aimster
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7 posted 2001-03-03 12:16 PM


by chance & this is totally off the subj lol
where in NC do you live? Just curious...was
born and raised there...live outside of Wilmington
now (the coast)...

Amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


DreamLess
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8 posted 2001-03-03 12:22 PM


i think this friend of yours is very lucky
to have some one like u..who appericate a friendship meaning..as a friend

really nice words

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