Open Poetry #12 |
Softly Steal Mine Heart |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wouldst thou come now to softly steal mine heart? And once upon a time when thou hast stolen mine heart, wouldst thou also givest to me an everlasting and eternal love? Wouldst thou let me see thy love shine from thine heart? Wouldst thou look deep into mine eyes and see the love that shineth from mine soul? Wouldst thou let me love thee for an eternity? Wouldst thou please come now..... and softly steal mine heart? Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful! The best way to steal a heart softly. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks for stopping in and leaving thoughts Walker. Much appreciate it. Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Romantic and pulsing with Shakespearean style...lovely write. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 03-02-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
uh oh - the muses are out....wonderful... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Pm, Sunshine, thanks to you both for the kind words, and for stopping in. Hugs Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes..........softly......... this is wonderful! SEA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks for stopping in Sea, and leaving your kind words. peace~ Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Lovely, thanks for posting. Red |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you Red, for stopping by and reading. ~peace~ Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
real lovely..so romantic and gentle just like your name WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR [img]file://A:/hearts1.gif[/img] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a lovely, romantic poem! I like this very much! *S* |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Oh I really like this. It is truly romantic*sighs* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dreamless, Suthern, Kitkat, lol.....I think I will always be a romantic at heart. Thanks for stopping in and leaving your kind words. ~peace Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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