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Open Poetry #12

Hollow-Empty

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

0 posted 2001-03-02 04:29 PM

There is this hollow-empty which can not be defined.
It is lying deep within my heart and deep within my mind.

The cross of a friendship lost, some days seems to much to bear.
Conversations lost, conversations missed in waitings, needing to be shared.

Words and memories that could never be shared with another, never appreciated, these still hold true.
And no more splendid times were spent then those times spent in talking with you.

As I sit here remembering our talks and the gentle poetry of your face.
I am profoundly and painfully aware no other could ever take your place.

But, how dare I have the right to miss your memory!
And leave me to curse and wonder why this is life's path which was chosen to be.

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

1 posted 2001-03-02 04:43 PM

You've expressed the emotions and feelings of missing someone very well here.

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

the romantic fanatic
Junior Member

since 2000-08-05

Posts 26
Spokane, WA U.S.A.

2 posted 2001-03-02 04:51 PM

Sad...but nice. Powerful emotions conveyed here and a light veil of regret it seems.

D-mon

ocean
New Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 6

3 posted 2001-03-02 07:29 PM

exquisitely beautiful...... sincere!!!!

NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

4 posted 2001-03-02 08:09 PM

very sad indeed

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

5 posted 2001-03-03 07:28 PM

dreamkeeper-thank you for your thoughts.
the romantic fanatic-thank you for stopping by, I appreciate your comments.
ocean-thank you.
NC-Thanks, I appreciate.

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