»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #12
»
Forever
| Open Poetry #12 |
|
Forever |
|
|
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Disillusion, embrazed me, when you left me. Confusion, taunt me, when you called. Illusion, captivated me, when you returned. Conclusion, close the door to you, forever. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
||
| © Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And thats a long, long time...interesting poem...James |
||
|
Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Oh the emotions and steps we go through with "love". You've captured that very well. And what we learn from it is a gift. Nice job with this, Walker! "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it seems to be the steps some of us go through.......short and well said  SEA |
||
|
Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very well expressed...thanks for sharing! Nathan |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
