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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-03-02 04:28 PM



Disillusion,
embrazed me,
when you left me.

Confusion,
taunt me,
when you called.

Illusion,
captivated me,
when you returned.

Conclusion,
close the door to you,
forever.


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2001-03-02 04:34 PM


And thats a long, long time...interesting poem...James
Celeste
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since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

2 posted 2001-03-02 04:41 PM


Oh the emotions and steps we go through with "love". You've captured that very well. And what we learn from it is a gift.
Nice job with this, Walker!

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2001-03-02 10:45 PM


it seems to be the steps some of us go through.......short and well said SEA
Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
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Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2001-03-03 12:38 PM


Very well expressed...thanks for sharing!

Nathan

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