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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Ever felt the qualms of night Euphoria through the shards of light Where all we feel intensified Strength of love never denied The sun just seems so bright each day Each step a hop to lead the way The scent of spring just fills the air Memories of how you stare No bitter taste is left behind For I’ve had more than most can find And know each time I hear your voice My heart retained I have no choice You’ve given me my very breath And now I live enduring tests That till I find one to replace Someone to fill the empty space That once was filled by you. I could walk off the hurt Run through the pain Wipe all the tears pouring down my face Deny the dream, that just never was Oh girl I just can't walk off the buzz Blessid Union of Souls [This message has been edited by spiked (edited 03-02-2001).] |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
"Ever felt the qualms of night Euphoria through the shards of light Where all we feel intensified Strength of love never denied" -- I really loved this! Incredible words here and overall an exellent piece!  *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Rich this is so very lovely...and so sad...each new poem you post just shows the depths of your poets soul |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
very touching, rich...good to see ya smiling.  |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
your words have really made me sad cause its so touchin |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you all so much, not really meant to be sad just worked out that way. We can feel love for someone and it will linger on for some time. It doesn't mean that we are hurting inside just that what we had felt must have been very strong to start with. There are many forms of happy and we can only move forward and use those things that we remember as a strenth not as a weakness. Rich |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
rich...........nice to see you writing again.........helen |
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