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Melding Words
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Melding Words |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Fingers dance Hands interlace Damp strands cling With drawn out sighs No spoken words Yet prints remain Just wanting Displayed in trembles Cold winter windows Radiators steam Glass fogging us from sight Blushing in response Our poems Melded into skin Flowery petals bloom With colors of love Stalks rise and shudder Positions traded Vine legs entwine Fittings made in heaven Golden moldings Molten, melding Beyond the edge Of love unbounded Melding words In puddles of desire... The first duty of love is to listen. ~ Paul Tillich ~ [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 03-02-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
your play on words and their meanings leave much to the imagination....and will warm many souls.... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
In puddles of desire Liquid words, currents of love Awash with the pleasure of your touch Written on the parchment on my heart This is wonderful...so sensual |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Bill, love those first three stanzas... very nice melding words... dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea - Paula - Dale- I 've learned to love words since I began writing poetry - when I can string them - to speak of my love of life, nature or love itself - in a fresh way that pleases =I'm happy - thank you for your kind words [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 03-04-2001).] |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 *** Greeneyes~ "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, flows in a very sensual way. Love the images. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very pretty words, Bill! |
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