Open Poetry #12 |
Crazy |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I let you go, Out of my arms, When warm days used to shine, I let It go, I let you go walking away with that open door, Never got a chance To say goodbye, Never had a dance with you, Now, So many nights, So many days without you This Is so crazy, just living without you, I just realise that I needed you, Because living without you, Drives me crazy, I can't do anything, I can't go anywhere, Because I keep thinking of you Anywhere I go Anywhere I do, Drive me crazy, Without you, besides me, sleepless nights, It drives me crazy, Days without you, It Is so crazy, Crazy.... [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 03-03-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
YEPPERS..........................you wrote this one for me didn't you? I mean, someone had to explain to me how I felt and this just about does it. Well written, and all too true are the feelings exposed in this piece. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 03-03-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know exactly what you mean vandana...I don't want to let go but I know that I must...for how can I hold onto something that is not mine...yet I still have hope that it will be...crazy huh...James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh it is so crazy isn't it? Just how I was feeling when I wrote my last few poems. Its insane to try to live without the one you love, and yet, sometimes the choice is not ours. Good stuff. Sandra |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vandana, this reads like a song.......one I know all the words to.......very well done!! SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you all for your kind replies |
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