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vandana
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0 posted 2001-03-03 05:27 PM


I let you go,
Out of my arms,
When warm days
used to shine,
I let It go,
I let you go
walking away
with that open door,
Never got a chance
To say goodbye,
Never had a dance
with you,
Now,
So many nights,
So many days
without you
This Is so crazy,
just living without you,
I just realise
that I needed you,
Because
living without you,
Drives me crazy,
I can't do anything,
I can't go anywhere,
Because I keep thinking of you
Anywhere I go
Anywhere I do,
Drive me crazy,
Without you,
besides me,
sleepless nights,
It drives me crazy,
Days without you,
It Is so crazy,
Crazy....


[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 03-03-2001).]

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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2001-03-03 05:35 PM


YEPPERS..........................you wrote this one for me didn't you? I mean, someone had to explain to me how I felt and this just about does it.

Well written, and all too true are the feelings exposed in this piece.

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 03-03-2001).]

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-03-03 05:36 PM


I know exactly what you mean vandana...I don't want to let go but I know that I must...for how can I hold onto something that is not mine...yet I still have hope that it will be...crazy huh...James
catalinamoon
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3 posted 2001-03-03 05:47 PM


Oh it is so crazy isn't it? Just how I was feeling when I wrote my last few poems. Its insane to try to live without the one you love, and yet, sometimes the choice is not ours.
Good stuff.
Sandra

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with you
4 posted 2001-03-03 07:22 PM


Vandana, this reads like a song.......one I know all the words to.......very well done!! SEA
vandana
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5 posted 2001-03-04 12:33 PM


Thank you all for your kind replies
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