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| Open Poetry #12 |
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That Feeling |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
"That Feeling" Have you ever had that feeling A feeling you just can't explain That kind of feeling that leaves You breathless, you knees weak And you're never the same That feeling that leaves you heart Pounding and your eyes shiny Like your heart's been struck By lighting That feeling that's just right That feeling which is worth A fight The kind that keeps you up at night That feeling of oh if only You were mine then everything Would be all right That feeling that makes you want To "play" and you respond without Delay That feeling that doesn't happen Everyday and touches your heart And soul in a special way The kind of feeling that you Wouldn't trade That kind of feeling I must say I feel everytime you cast Your baby blues my way By: Lisa Kennedy  ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
i really liked those words it is so touching and it really discribe a lover feelings.. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'That feeling that doesn't happen Everyday and touches your heart And soul in a special way The kind of feeling that you Wouldn't trade That kind of feeling I must say I feel everytime you cast Your baby blues my way' Hey Lisa! This is a wonderfully romantic poem! Great writing! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
lisa- hey sweet sis of mine! great to see you here! this is excellent as all of your poetry is...very beautiful & romantic...a keeper for sure...take care and visit us here more often pleeze lol  love ya amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
DreamLess: Thanks for reading glad you liked it. Take care. Snowpants: Thanks for the compliment. I appricate it. I'm glad you liked it. Amy: Hello my fellow poet. Glad you enjoyed this. Maybe I will come to Open more. I have things and friends all over so I have to share my time lol. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very beautifully said, but what about us dark eyed  very very sweet poem if i may say thanks for the wonderful read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem Lisa...James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
BUMP  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
acire: Thanks. Brown eyes and green for that matter can be sweet and sexy also. The poem was about someone w/ blue eyes though.I'm glad you liked it. JamesMichael: Thanks for reading my poem. Take care. Amy: Thanks for the bump girl. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hi Lisa, nice to see you here hon you have penned a really lovely poem and yes I think most of us know THAT feeling. Keep writing hon and I'll keep reading hugs Maree I may know the word, but not say it I may know the truth, but not face it I may hear a sound, a whisper sacred and profound but turn my head, indifferent. Natalie Merchant [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-06-2001).] |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Dark Angel: Thank Marie for reading my poem. I'm glad you liked it. Also am glad to hear I'm not the only one who has these happy wonderful feelings. I will keep writing but I write everywhere, excpet I havent wrote any in Spirtual yet, just dont have anything for that forum yet is all. Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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