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SwEeTnSeXy18
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0 posted 2001-03-02 12:03 PM


"That Feeling"

Have you ever had that feeling
A feeling you just can't explain

That kind of feeling that leaves
You breathless, you knees weak
And you're never the same

That feeling that leaves you heart
Pounding and your eyes shiny
Like your heart's been struck
By lighting

That feeling that's just right
That feeling which is worth
A fight
The kind that keeps you up at night

That feeling of oh if only
You were mine then everything
Would be all right

That feeling that makes you want
To "play" and you respond without
Delay

That feeling that doesn't happen
Everyday and touches your heart
And soul in a special way
The kind of feeling that you
Wouldn't trade
That kind of feeling I must say
I feel everytime you cast
Your baby blues my way

By: Lisa Kennedy


~in order to gain, you have to lose~


© Copyright 2001 Lisa Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
DreamLess
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since 2001-02-28
Posts 92

1 posted 2001-03-02 01:16 AM


i really liked those words
it is so touching and it really discribe
a lover feelings..

snowpants
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2 posted 2001-03-02 07:39 AM


'That feeling that doesn't happen
Everyday and touches your heart
And soul in a special way
The kind of feeling that you
Wouldn't trade
That kind of feeling I must say
I feel everytime you cast
Your baby blues my way'

Hey Lisa! This is a wonderfully romantic poem! Great writing!

sp


everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2001-03-02 02:07 PM


lisa-

hey sweet sis of mine! great to see
you here! this is excellent as all of
your poetry is...very beautiful &
romantic...a keeper for sure...take
care and visit us here more often
pleeze lol

love ya
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


SwEeTnSeXy18
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4 posted 2001-03-03 03:37 PM


DreamLess:

Thanks for reading glad you liked it. Take care.

Snowpants:

Thanks for the compliment. I appricate it. I'm glad you liked it.

Amy:

Hello my fellow poet. Glad you enjoyed this. Maybe I will come to Open more. I have things and friends all over so I have to share my time lol.

~Lisa~

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


Acies
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5 posted 2001-03-03 06:25 PM


very beautifully said, but what about us dark eyed
very very sweet poem if i may say
thanks for the wonderful read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-03-04 03:40 PM


Enjoyed reading your poem Lisa...James
Aimster
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7 posted 2001-03-04 11:59 PM


BUMP



"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


SwEeTnSeXy18
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8 posted 2001-03-05 06:24 PM


acire:

Thanks. Brown eyes and green for that matter can be sweet and sexy also. The poem was about someone w/ blue eyes though.I'm glad you liked it.

JamesMichael:

Thanks for reading my poem. Take care.

Amy:

Thanks for the bump girl.

~Lisa~



~in order to gain, you have to lose~


Dark Angel
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9 posted 2001-03-06 03:23 PM


Hi Lisa,

nice to see you here hon

you have penned a really lovely poem and yes I think most of us know THAT feeling.
Keep writing hon and I'll keep reading

hugs

Maree


I may know the word, but not say it
I may know the truth, but not face it
I may hear a sound, a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head, indifferent.

Natalie Merchant


[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-06-2001).]

SwEeTnSeXy18
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10 posted 2001-03-07 08:28 PM


Dark Angel:

Thank Marie for reading my poem. I'm glad you liked it. Also am glad to hear I'm not the only one who has these happy wonderful feelings. I will keep writing but I write everywhere, excpet I havent wrote any in Spirtual yet, just dont have anything for that forum yet is all. Take care.

~Lisa~


~in order to gain, you have to lose~


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