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In These Visits
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In These Visits |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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In These Visits in my visits I stop and reflect take in some life gather retrospect seems like life is circumspect in what I read and in what I inspect thank you… thank you for taking all this time to shape the words in line of rhyme for taking a moment for giving a clue for that is exactly what poets do thank you… every visit that I make gives me grist and thought to take gives me lift a moment's calm serves me well a loving balm thank you… for giving me reason with each little rhyme for allowing a comment a few hundred times which have added up, in rapid succession but from each read I read I learn such a lesson thank you… and in these visits that I make with you I pray, that someday I shall be a poet, too… thank you thank you for letting me in to sit and to write for allowing within a haven, a home a place to spread wing yes thank you for these many gifts of kind loving… thank you Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You are a poet, Karilea, and a very good one!! Thank you! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Congratulations on the 12,000th post ! It's a jewel ! Thank YOU ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful!!!!! And so very very true. What we recieve from each visit here is cherished.  "One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--my sweet poet friend, you have the heart of a poet, you write beautiful poetry...you are a poet...a wonderful poet. Thank you for all the lovely poetry that spills out of you on a daily basis...all though I might not reply to all...I do try to read...and your replies are wonderful...gosh, thanks, just for being you! |
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Embers_Before_God Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 101USA |
You write very well from the two I've read...you remind me of someone else that used to post somewhere else....Embers Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
on occasion i've written some poems i take some pride in - If I'd written this - I'd take out a full page adv. in other words =you're far too modest and humble - - this is most beautiful, I'm sure all of us who call you friend are far more proud of having you for a friend - thanyou could possibly feel (as expressed here) but are simply unable to express it here as poetically as you have |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Thank YOU, Sunshine...  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Congratulations! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Holy, toledo! Your 12,010th post. You do get around and I certainly echo your sentiment about the visits here. When I'm not being silly-sad 'cuz my stuff's being skipped over for awhile. When I let myself glean the blessings of the other poets' works/words. Good piece, Sunshine! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You never fail to amaze me with your writing. Please, don't stop. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
This poem reflects so much of what I feel in my heart when I read all of the wonderful poetry here.....thank YOU : ) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you're welcome. . . and thank you. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
"in my visits I stop and reflect take in some life gather retrospect" And give us of yourself so generously. *S* Well done, Sunshine... and congratulations! |
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Brian Beaudry Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 57Northern Ontario Canada |
You voiced my sentiments exactly Sunshine, but in a much more eloquent and poetic way than I ever could.I thank you for sharing this with us and must add that you ARE a POET my friend!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
They say one receives what one gives..that is why you receive so much, Sunshine...you are a giver,,, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You folks are AWESOME |
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