Heartbreak Shore (An attempt at song writing)

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Open Poetry #12

Heartbreak Shore (An attempt at song writing)

Brian Beaudry
Member

since 2001-03-03

Posts 57
Northern Ontario Canada

0 posted 2001-03-07 06:09 PM

Heartbreak Shore

I sit and ponder by the sea
I feel my spirit soaring free
And still I want for more
On this heartbreak shore

I watch the gulls as they float by
Silhouettes against the sky
And still I want for more
On this heartbreak shore

I listen to the mermaids sing
Soft and clear their voices ring

I hear the thunder, feel the rain
And let it wash away my pain

The salty breezes stroke my face
Reminding me of your embrace
And still I want for more
On this heartbreak shore

I listen to the ocean swells
And all the stories that it tells

I watch the dark clouds drifting by
As moonlight comes to fill the sky

I see the stars begin their night
As clouds move out in rapid flight

I see your face against the moon
In speeded heartbeat almost swoon
And still I want for more
On this heartbreak shore

If I could hold you close and tight
Caress your body through the night
I would not want for more
On this heartbreak shore

Brian Beaudry

[This message has been edited by Brian Beaudry (edited 03-07-2001).]

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2001-03-07 07:31 PM

Very nice, Brian. Now if this is set to music that lets hear the words, it will be beautiful to hear. ME

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-03-07 08:40 PM

This is so beautiful and so full of longing, very well expressed with a wonderful flow! This is a keeper, into the library this goes

Take care,
Melissa~

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

~Melissa P. Monette~

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 03-07-2001).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2001-03-07 08:50 PM

Brian - the words are great. Now one must put in the chords, so I can play it.

BC

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