Open Poetry #12 |
Upon This Midnight Hour |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Upon This Midnight Hour ~*Marge Tindal*~ Come to me, love, in the midnight hour When the sky is bathed in meteor shower Boldly ablaze with such flaming power Meant for loving you Let's spirit across this Milky Way night Soaring with sheer heavenly delight Pausing in just a moment of light Reflecting on this love I'll hold you gently in arms so true Shade this night with special hue Feathered with the blush of you Upon this midnight hour ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Whoo hoo there Margie girl.....midnight lovin eh? This is beautiful! SEA |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
How to say, if only life, would answer the call, and be this way. I hope for you it does. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Margie girl...this is very romantic...there must be a moon or two shinning on you...I haven't seen the moon in such a long time...just rain. (cozy rain) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Simply lovely, it flowed so nicely when I read it..read it outloud..sometimes that's the best way to FEEL poetry. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderful! This is ethereal in feel, made me feel as though I was listening to a Greek God & Godess as they made their universal caresses throughout the heavens. Enchanting! |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
MARGE Boy!!!! I'm speechless in Nahunta, sitting near the Florida/Georgia state line. Your poem made me wish; now I have "luv'n" on my mind. What is it about the witching hour for SEA & yourself.(lol) By the way, this was a great write. Excellently penned. I loved it. I can't comment on it enough. Garfield |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
oh.. its so simple but very affective you see .. the poems reflect what's in side the poet and what i can see is a pure soul in their |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Marge..James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Yeah, gal ... how 'bout you ? ATelamon~ Yes, it does. Thank you for your thoughts. Martie~ I send you a slice of moonbeams upon a moistened sky Spinning dreams in the midnight hour to catch you on a *sigh* *Hugs* PoetdeVine~ Oh ... I so agree. It's the ONLY way to read 'em. Thank you for the read. VAS~ Thanks for a stirring comment. GGRN~ *got me grinning* DreamLess~ I hope that my writing is sometimes the reflection of my soul. Thank you for the read. JamesMichael~ *Hugs* and a thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
take us to the stars via your heart Margie-girl wonderful celestial imagery here!!! love that milky way about ya Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Oh my ... the night is indeed lit with the splendor of the stars ! *Hugs*, hon ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Thus is the birth of another midnight rainbow on the horizon. Beautiful write my friend. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Great flow, Great poem! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love the sweet romance of this beautiful write! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ You send a rainbow of loving thoughts with just knowing you read ... Love ya' VoiceLess~ Thank you so much. SuthernGal~ There is much beauty found in the romance of the night ... You're a sweet lady to visit. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Feathered with the blush of you Upon this midnight hour" Lovely thoughts and imagery...beautiful write. Poeminister "There is no remedy for love but to love more." --Henry David Thoreau |
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