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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-02-28 10:11 PM


Come to me, Brigadoon….

dream the dream
want the want
tease the seem
thrill the taunt
come to me, O Brigadoon
carry me there, to the moon

saw it in his eyes
saw the dancer, dance
saw within his soul
O the sweet romance
come of me, O Brigadoon
carry me there, to the moon

to love a love
that is a dream
to make one shine
to see the gleam!
come with me, O Brigadoon
carry me there, to the moon

feel the course
feel the stream
feel the dance
upon moonbeam
come to me, O Brigadoon
carry me there, to the moon

now dance the merry dance
now chance the sweetened chance
now sing the song, romance!
now feel swift, soft, the lance!
come of me, O Brigadoon
carry me there, to the moon

and when the dream ends
lend to me the mend
pray I lean on the thought
of the one that taught
come to me, O Brigadoon
carry me back, from the moon

sweet dance, sweet chance
golden lance, sung romance….

thank you, Brigadoon….


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ATelamon
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1 posted 2001-02-28 10:17 PM


You speak the words well. And a title containing the word brigadoon does attract the words seen trhough eyes.

Well done
AT


"For al these things, honor, dishonor, pain... happen to all men. They are not the mark of a virtuous life... or lack thereof" Marcus Aurelius

doreen peri
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2 posted 2001-02-28 10:18 PM


,,, one of my favorites....... oh i love musicals which keep my attention for a while.....
JLR
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3 posted 2001-02-28 10:28 PM


'To love a love that is a dream'. Sometimes there are just lines that I want to remember forever, this is one of them.
Poeminister
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4 posted 2001-02-28 10:37 PM


Lady in White--
I like this melody...the flow and the feeling...beautiful...

Poeminister

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