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Even In Dreams.............
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Even In Dreams............. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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* I had a dream of my ex-husband a little bit ago.........this is exactly what it was like.* ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I woke up from a dream of you ............shaken............... it wasn't a nightmare not exactly......... just........twisted you were so together so nice.............. even gentle you wanted me back in your life it really spooked me because you see.......... I remember........ I've felt your hate with the back of your hand connecting with my face .......seen the cold fury in your eyes and I knew......... You had no love for me Dreaming of you being kind and loving was terrifying and really, very sad because, even in dreams I know that's not how you are ~SEA~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
SEA: ((((((((((hug))))))))))) Dreams-reality-fantasy, poetry, they are so closely intertwined...........God bless you sweet girl.. Here's wishing your reality is blessed. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
A myriad of thoughts run through my mind after reading this. It does sound like you are good to be out of that situation. Well written piece. That's all I will say and suffice it to 'move on.' |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Very powerful words and well written, its a human failing that we often only remember the good times in relationships and this can be a danger. Thanks for posting, take care. Regards, Olias. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kathleen~ all is well........it's been a long time now, but sometimes those dreams happen, I write about it and move on......love the hug, thank you  VAS~I'm in a fantastic marriage now......he is my dream come true, versus my nightmare lived.....thank you Olias~ thank you, dreams sometimes really mess with me...just had to get this one out and away from me...... ~SEA [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and when you woke up from the nightmare... lying next to you was a dream come true  and yes .. as you said...write it all out and you did so in an emotionally charged and releasing way well done Sea-girlie heres to sweet dreams Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Geez, that does sound scary. Of course, the consolation is that it will NEVER come true. ((((hugs)))) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Ohh god, Sea...I hope you get out of this relationship....you don't know need some man hitting on you....you're a beautiful woman, I'll take you cause, I would never hit a woman, not even my mother cause, I love woman and I realize that without them, there would be no guys..... great work! Nathan |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, There is so much power and strength in this. So happy to see you have moved on. Scary images. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
...Sad that you carry these thoughts and dreams with you...I hope that all your present and future relationships will be loving and caring...James |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wow, SEA...this is quite powerful, but I am extremely glad you have gotten far away from that nightmare and are living with your 'dream.' Great penning! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
So sorry you experianced a time with a man who hurt you. I understand about those dreams. I occasionly have one about my ex. I am so glad to hear you have a good husband now. You deserve happiness. Hugs, Deb |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
(((warm hugs))), glad that it was only a dream..... you described your feelings so well....touched my heart. Charisma |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Well...charisma already said what i was gonna say. Amen. Good way to deal with it! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
so glad you got that out of your system!! what a nasty man he must've been..but i'll bet such a time with him made you stronger, no?.. i believe everything happens for a reason...there is no wasted time....just moments of learning... so happy youre in a good relationship now..  hugs, g "there is no BEST in a world of INDIVIDUALS..." "FORGIVENESS is giving up my right to hurt you for hurting me..." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hey, just wanted to say a heartfelt thank you to everyone who responded to this. It was a painful time in my life, and sometimes, dreams make me remember....yes, it made me stronger.........taught me alot about myself, and what I will and will not accept in my life. Yes, my husband Jon is my dreams ( the happy ones) come true...he treats me VERY well. He's amazing. Thank you all for your caring sweet words.....it means the world to me. Hugs to each of you, SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And with the pen comes the therapy of soul and heart one word at a time with the wakening to a world of sweetness and love that is so well deserving. Wonderful pouring out my friend and as are the others, I am so happy to see you living in a world of love with whom we have all come to know as a very special man. You have shown that with your words and we just plain figured out on our own how special you are by reading in between the lines and sweet smiles. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ always, you are so nice. Thank you for that. You made me smile Vandana~ thanks for reading ~SEA |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Is horrible that you went thru this. But is wonderful that you express it in writing. I'm glad you're rid of him and found real love. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sea.......i know this dream......thank God he is over & so is the dream.....nice to see your reality so sweet....helen |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i guess there's nothing much else to say...just want to say that you sent me on a rollercoaster ride with this writing and was glad to know at the end that all is well with you... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Wow! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hugs Sea...I've been the path, not one I wished to follow....Bravo to you....be well Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
This one said so much. I like the way you write. Red |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You dreamed of what you thought him to be When you first offered your heart But now you wake to reality A happiness from which you won't part. Your joy may have taken a while to find But it lets you leave that past behind. Big hugs, sweet SEA. *S* |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
A big big thank you to you all....these dreams can sure be frightening....Suthern, thank you so much for that beautiful, poetic reply SEA |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
So simple, yet poignant- How dreams try to deceive Liz |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Elizabeth....yes, I guess that was the core of it......thank you very much.....he always lied to me......sad but thankfully over! SEA |
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