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Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

0 posted 2001-02-28 09:46 PM

Upon a bed daisies
I lay my sleep filled head
There in the dark of night
The pull of sleep I must fight

For I must be awake for the kiss of life..

The stars of the universe watch from above
The silence broke by the a lone mourning dove
Thoughts of the past, future, and today.
With the clouds they simply slip away..

Do they feel the kiss of life??

As I watched the east from a far
Awaiting the appearance of a star
I see a spiral of hues
and feel upon my cracked lips the awaking of dew..

The kiss is coming...

Then I close my eyes and begin to feel
Upon my lips a slow melting warmth does steal
I open my eyes to the sun's showering rays
And on my lips a promise of better days..

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-02-28 10:50 PM

this is wonderful

SEA

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

2 posted 2001-03-01 01:03 AM

WOW, this piece is very beautiful Voiceless...brilliant work!

Nathan

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

3 posted 2001-03-01 03:20 AM

Voiceless
Oh my goodness... This was simply excellent. The visual I got from this one with the dew, the sun, and finally the kiss was just wonderful. Marge Tindal wrote earlier about a "Spring Fling." Between the both of you, I tempted to stay up all night to get my "Kiss of Life" & have my "Spring Fling" all at the same time.
Awesome write. Beautiful.

Garfield

DreamLess
Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 92

4 posted 2001-03-01 04:32 AM

WOW ..
what you said their was soo
wonderful..
real perfect

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-03-01 01:54 PM

beautiful imagery and emotions here
wonderful expressive writing Voiceless
inspiring words of hope.
great work
take care
jm

Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain.
~Kahlil Gibran~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

6 posted 2001-03-01 10:51 PM

Then I close my eyes and begin to feel
Upon my lips a slow melting warmth does steal
I open my eyes to the sun's showering rays
And on my lips a promise of better days..

*************************

Yes, they are a great promise indeed and one that you can count on. Simply awesome write and the imagery was beautiful to say the least. I love the way you express yourself in this piece and I find much comfort in your words here. In my library with this one.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-03-02 04:04 AM

I could use a kiss of life...James

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2001-03-02 12:48 PM

Beautiful images and written well... I like this a lot!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2001-03-03 03:09 PM

A very positive and enchanting work! I enjoyed the warmth of the anticipation! Good work!!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

10 posted 2001-03-03 09:24 PM

Simply beautiful!

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