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RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 2001-02-28 07:16 PM

Write Me

Take your pencil
and write me
my life
put all the pain
and pleasure
into words
so that I can
read me
pull out the notepad
of my memories
and share them with me
dotting all the i's
and crossing all the t's
making some kind of sense
of all these feelings
write me
the happiness
the basis of human existence
in neat paragraphs
with proper punctuation
so that I can feel it
see it
read it

write me.

Robert

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-02-28 07:47 PM

What an invitation!....and what an accomplishment for the one that will....

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

2 posted 2001-02-28 08:05 PM

Thank you sunshine!!!

Robert

if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-02-28 08:56 PM

No, no, its too painful to read oneself on paper, Robert.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

[This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-28-2001).]

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

4 posted 2001-02-28 09:00 PM

Interesting..
Well done..

~*Peachy Be*~

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

5 posted 2001-02-28 09:38 PM

No one knows you like you -
unraveling threads
in silky chords
of memories,
the secrets squired
in tiny boxes
stored away,
stored away,
the mysteries of a man,
the loves,
the loves lost
and gained.

Corinne

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

6 posted 2001-03-01 07:15 AM

yes it can be painful to read of oneself...but enlightening!!!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-03-01 09:18 AM

I don't think I'm ready for anyone to write me......could anyone write me and really, truly get it right.....I don't know.....what a great poem!

SEA

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

8 posted 2001-03-01 06:12 PM

perhaps they couldn't write you as accurately as you might like them to....but they might have a whole nuther slant on you that you never saw.

Robert

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