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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

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0 posted 2001-02-28 12:36 PM

and I had on that sundress
that you loved the way it curved over
my breasts and today the cool of
the fall air made them raise
noticeably in the thin fabric
I with all my bundles in one hand
fumbled for the door
just as the wind funneled my skirt
skyward to meet the warmth
wolf whistles from across the way
flushed my cheeks red
and you laughed
and laughed and didn’t help one bit
as I fought my battle with the wind
and I got mad
at you
so you took me in your arms and
kissed me until the fire in my eyes
burned lower
instead

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-02-28 01:10 PM

Excellent....

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

2 posted 2001-02-28 01:43 PM

Wow jellybeans!!! I really like this. Humorous, sensual and romantic. This one is great.

Write on!

"HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike

Dennis
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 235
Indiana

3 posted 2001-02-28 01:58 PM

I like it

Dennis

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suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2001-02-28 04:21 PM

I love this, gal! From the frustration to the fury to the (furiously blushing and backtracking 'fore Nan's eraser gets me! LOL)

Fire. Or flames. Perhaps flare? Fulmination? Furnace? *G* Yup... one of those has to be the word I was looking for! LOL

[This message has been edited by suthern (edited 03-01-2001).]

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-02-28 04:25 PM

Wow! I just love those spur of the moment love encounters...I could see myself doing this to a woman I was very fond of...and the kissing part would be the best part...ummm ummm good!! Obviously I really enjoyed this....take care and wear that dress often......ethome

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-03-01 01:47 PM

yowzers girlie...
are you trying to start a fire in here

me thinks you are a cinnamon red hot today...
instead of a jelly bean *G*
outstanding write of detail and imagery
OH YES gotta love that imagery LOL
great writing girlfriend!!!

Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain.
~Kahlil Gibran~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2001-03-01 01:55 PM

jellybeans--wonderful, visual, fun and loving....enjoyed very much!

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

8 posted 2001-03-01 02:01 PM

This is my new favorite poem...thanks for the smile it gave me. Oh and it was written brilliantly!

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

9 posted 2001-03-01 05:49 PM

thanks so much all, don't have time to respond to each one, but after the week I have had...let me tell you that each one of you makes me smile.....and JLR...lol...never had someone say one of mine was their favorite.....thanks

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