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A Song of You
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A Song of You |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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There's a new song I keep hearing Its lyrics consist of one word It is by far the most precious This heart of mine has ever heard. Hope's pure voice soars on the lead part She had almost died years ago But she came out of seclusion To offer her sweet soprano. Faith's shy alto blends smoothly And her confidence really shows Once crippled, the cost to restore her Is something no one really knows. An entire ensemble's on tenor - Chuckles, Grins, Laughter, and Smiles The gang is having a grand time They'd dropped out of sight for a while. Adding bass, Trust's voice is steady Though slightly hoarse from lack of use He had been silent for decades After suffering much abuse. Their harmony lifts my spirits And I know I won't be the same I'm enthralled by this song they made In simply repeating your name. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
suthern, I do believe you've caught the symphony of a voice in love...well done! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey "YOU"---this is fantastic, will be reading this one over and over--so? into my library! I LOVE IT! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is just lovely Suthern! A song in your heart, and beautiful expression through your pen ... wonderful!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very nice dear.......but....but...ya didn't respond to my "garbage?".....LOL....and you usually respond bunches?....Check ya later |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful. This one sings!  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
suthern--What a wonderful and uplifting poem...with all those positive voices...you got yourself a hit! |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
I hear the song of this poem in the wind definitely !!Greatly written. CD |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay, who are you and what have you done with suthern????  I know I saw her name on this piece but when I read it, it turned out to be a "HAPPY" poem, so, what's up with that? Well, whoever you are, I might as well reply to the poem since I am here. First off, the rhyme scheme is wonderful and the words are magical, the cadence is dead on and I do so love the positive tone in the song you are singing. Beautiful write and I expect it to hit the top ten this week. Now, if you don't mind, could you point me in the direction of where you hid our cherished poet so that I might at least feed her a bit! Thank you ( oops, we 'preciate ya!!) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SuthernGal~ Lovely and lyrically lilting ! Happy suits ya' ! Yep ! I so enjoyed what you did with this tune ! Sing it, gal ! *Hugs-A-Plenty* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I love it to death! The music of emotions is brilliant! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautifully penned. Enjoyed this very much. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Amazing how the sound of his voice, or even speaking his name, can bring up all those feelings, and happy, beautiful songs. I love this. Sandra |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a beautiful song, Suthern!! A very sweet tune!! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ok I would ditto mark cause he hit it perfect....*g* but............. I have to apologize first...last week I said your lonely poem was the best you ever wrote...then you gave birth to the twins...and I had to eat my words...now this one....sheeesh girl I know I said I gained 3 pounds with Valentines sweets, but can't you throw some salt and pepper my way, these words of mine are rather tasteless........ no really ruth, this is one of your best...and its smiling...as are you, I can't think of a more perfect poem to read this morning to make me smile too really nice writing lady |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I so love to see you singing happily dear! Excellent write! HugsNow respond to that Toe's garbage would ya? |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sunshine: Thank you! *S* Your "well done" is appreciated. *S* Serenity: Really? You honor me, lady... thank you very much! *S* Kit: And as long as the song stays in my heart, no one has to plug their ears! LOL. Thank you very much! Toerag: Thank you, sweets. *G* But what's this "garbage?" If you're talking about your great poems, you know I'll ALWAYS respond ... I jes' gotta shake off this werk monster fer a while. *S* (And yanno... it's been weeks between your appearances lately... I thought I had PLENTY of time. LOL) PDV: Thank you! I'm glad you like the harmony! *S* Martie: I'm not used to hearing positive voices in my head... but I like it! *G* Thank you so much! CD: Thank you so much for reading... and for hearing. *S* Mark: Shhhhhh... no one's supposed to notice the substitution... and it won't kill her to miss a few meals! LOL. Wonderful, magical and beautiful?? WOW!! Thank you, cowboy... we 'preciate ya, too! *S* Marge: Trust me, gal... you DON'T want ME to sing! LOL. Thank you hug lady... very much! Voiceless: Thank you for loving it. *S* "music of emotions"... I like that! *S* Poeminister: Your kind words are greatly appreciated. Thank you! Catalina: And I do love being amazed. *G* Thank you! Denise: Thank you... I'm glad you enjoyed! jellybeans: Dear ditto queen, I'll hand you some fine and spicy tabasco sauce to season your words if they keep sounding this good to me! LOL. G'head and change your mind often if you're thinking they're all the best. *G* Thank you... your smile is the perfect compliment! WhtDove: Just be glad you can't hear! LOL. Thank you so much! And I plan to respond to Toe's POEMS... can't find any garbage with his name attached! *G* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Im baaaaack(like a bad rash) *L*  well now who is this singing like a canary in spring....*S* this is so uplifting and inspiring Ruth-girlie ... wonderful sincere rhymes of anticipation... you sing a lovely tune me dear ... oncore ... oncore ... of your cadence ... I want more consider this another quarter in the jukebox play it again Sam lol Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
suthern, I know about this...very nice |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
JM: Hey, I like red polka dots... so I'll just say welcome back! *G* But if the singing is lovely, Mark's right... someone really has hidden suthern and her screeching away. LOL. Thankie kindly, ma'am. *S* PS: I'm glad you know... thank you very much! *S* |
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