Open Poetry #12 |
Breezes |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I wrote this 6 months ago on one of our windy days in one of the windiest cities in the west. BREEZES Virginia Salter breezes sweep the sky just watch debris go by cleaning every nook and cranny sand blasting every kid and nanny moving real estate through and o’er the gate settling it somewhere as it clears the air well, it’s not exactly true I just trade soils and junk for new mine heads easterly while yours comes right at me I guess I should be glad that you don’t fill your pad with ‘nure and old tin cans to rise o’er desert sands so I’ll just sneeze and shake from allergies that quake the very core of me that’s how it’s got to be, I see © August 31. 2000 |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
*smiling* I love your mind, VAS! You shine! "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, dreamkeeper Kellie! Glad you enjoyed!My mind is a terrible thing to waste. ;o} |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
VAS - oh does this bring back memories of being in the high winds with everything blowing all around. Phew! BC |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
This was so neat to read! A truely great poem! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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