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Open Poetry #12

Breathe Me (Acrostic 20)

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

0 posted 2001-02-28 09:46 PM

Burnished bright revealing in shine a song so
Real its melody avowes somehow begs attonement
Engaging each moment Life crying for your peace
Attention so wanted so worshipped please
Turn your eyes ears to listen I sing for you
Hearing your heartbeat the sound desired
Evermore showing the Journey is Home

My acceptance of all exists in crowded terror
Even as I long to be the one to you bringing peace

"I remember, knowing not if it is a blessing or curse. It matters not. I simply remember"

[This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-28-2001).]

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

1 posted 2001-02-28 09:48 PM

Nicely done!

~*Peachy Be*~

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-02-28 09:53 PM

OK, I like it especially the last line...but I need to read it again, after my head clears. --RJ

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