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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-02-27 07:46 PM

Whispers silence as the death of love falls over the land,
Again she is dreaming and dancing,
Somehow lost in the madness of all the markings,
Of distance, scars, and mercy love.
They know she is here again just barefoot and wandering,
Twirling around in circles with her alter egos,
While stepping lightly so not to disturb the eggshells.
Crumble and dust her predestinated will,
And circle the earch with it.
Take her hand and capture her smile,
While she makes you wonder if you're truly hers,
Or if you're just envisioning pain in diguise.
Trembling now she waits for you as a ghost,
On another abandoned path wraught with wild growth,
And previously tested faith abilities.
Turn the corners again and again,
And drink of the potions you find there on the floor.
Like Alice's looking glass,
The view through the mirror is simply warped.

(black lace)

"This above all-ask yourself in the stillest hour of your night:MUST I write? Delve into yourself for a deep answer.

Rainer Maria Rilke
from "Le

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-02-27 08:40 PM

Perhaps we need to fix that mirror. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

2 posted 2001-02-27 08:45 PM

Mirror land mirror land
what say ye that is truth
what seek but my inward side
and sighs never capable

Of non teared self seeing
why the words pass the brain
and why not their only
answer

Moving read, well done My complments

AT

"For al these things, honor, dishonor, pain... happen to all men. They are not the mark of a virtuous life... or lack thereof" Marcus Aurelius

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-02-27 08:51 PM

Sven:
Thanks, but can the mirror be fixed?

I'm glad you liked!

ATelaMon:
Thank you for the words following and thank you for reading/enjoying.

[This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 02-27-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-02-28 05:24 AM

this touched me greatly, Jenn.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

5 posted 2001-03-01 09:10 AM

Hi Temptress,

Does the morrow really have to be fixed, I really liked these lines,

"On another abandoned path wraught with wild growth, And previously tested faith abilities. Turn the corners again and again,
And drink of the potions you find there on the floor."

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-03-01 09:13 AM

Wow.......this is great!

SEA

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