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Open Poetry #12

Your eyes

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

0 posted 2001-02-27 01:27 PM

YOUR EYES

today
your green eyes
came with the new wind
over the seven seas
and I felt your breath in the air
and I closed my eyes
to see you
and your smiling green eyes

I listen to your voice
hush, hush
there is a sound faraway

was it the hot smile in your voice?
or was it only a breeze in my soul?

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

1 posted 2001-02-27 01:30 PM

yes, this one I like!!!
Red

Dixie
Junior Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 41
Tennessee

2 posted 2001-02-27 01:40 PM

The eyes are truely the windows to the soul..Very nice read...

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

3 posted 2001-02-27 01:42 PM

I love the flow to this one...and I especially like the last two lines...Great write AP

We all have wings...some of us don't know why

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

4 posted 2001-02-27 02:56 PM

thanks to you all for your nice and positive comments! AP

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-02-28 09:36 PM

Lovely write...soothing and mysterious. Nicely done.

Poeminister

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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-02-28 09:40 PM

I think I am now very very happy to have...green eyes...

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

7 posted 2001-02-28 10:06 PM

the thoughts in the last lines are beautiful..
A pleasure to read..

~*Peachy Be*~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-03-01 09:36 AM

ohhh, I like this very much

SEA

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