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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-02-26 09:14 PM


When You Write

in quiet content
my day is lent
to work, then play
then work again
hoping to find
some piece of mind
and then, in kind
you write one for me…

and when
you write one for me
it is as you see into my soul
as if you have found all my goals
and you write, to make me whole
when you write one for me…

as you
write one for me
a sweet song of lift
this complete sense of gift
that's when my feelings shift
when you
write one for me…

and I see what
you write for me
and I know that I share it
with all
who have heard
your call
whom you have held,
enthralled…

and I only pretend,
but will hold this feeling
till the end…
when you write one for me….


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-02-26 09:19 PM


Oh Karilea ... this is just lovely. Sometimes, the most beautiful gift is simply the written word ... you've captured this treasured feeling so wonderfully!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2001-02-26 10:00 PM


as so many have, so many have....

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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3 posted 2001-02-26 10:34 PM


Sunshine~ this is so beautiful......lovely... definately! SEA
Wilfred Yeats
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4 posted 2001-02-27 12:02 PM


it's been said - but it must be obvious - you've written of a feeling shared - and I am one of them
beautifully done

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5 posted 2001-02-27 01:34 AM


I'd write one for you any day my dear lady poet friend if I was the one you were thinking of....beautiful aspect of open emotion you've penned here.....ethome

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-02-27 10:19 AM


Isn't it a lovely feeling to think sometimes that the poems speak to us, and we wonder if it was indeed written for us...and that is when we stop and think...s/he doesn't even know me...

and all we can then feel is the connection of human spirits swirling among the blue pages...

Thank you all for reading!

suthern
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7 posted 2001-02-28 01:36 PM


Sunshine, you've captured the magic of poetry... words that speak as if they were written for only you, gifts left by an understanding friend who may not even know your name. Beautiful!
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8 posted 2001-02-28 06:38 PM


indeed the connection is great my friend. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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9 posted 2001-03-01 09:50 AM


Suthern, Sven....thank you both!
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