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When You Write |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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When You Write in quiet content my day is lent to work, then play then work again hoping to find some piece of mind and then, in kind you write one for me… and when you write one for me it is as you see into my soul as if you have found all my goals and you write, to make me whole when you write one for me… as you write one for me a sweet song of lift this complete sense of gift that's when my feelings shift when you write one for me… and I see what you write for me and I know that I share it with all who have heard your call whom you have held, enthralled… and I only pretend, but will hold this feeling till the end… when you write one for me…. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Karilea ... this is just lovely. Sometimes, the most beautiful gift is simply the written word ... you've captured this treasured feeling so wonderfully!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
as so many have, so many have.... "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ this is so beautiful......lovely... definately! SEA |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
it's been said - but it must be obvious - you've written of a feeling shared - and I am one of them beautifully done |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'd write one for you any day my dear lady poet friend if I was the one you were thinking of....beautiful aspect of open emotion you've penned here.....ethome The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Isn't it a lovely feeling to think sometimes that the poems speak to us, and we wonder if it was indeed written for us...and that is when we stop and think...s/he doesn't even know me... and all we can then feel is the connection of human spirits swirling among the blue pages... Thank you all for reading! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sunshine, you've captured the magic of poetry... words that speak as if they were written for only you, gifts left by an understanding friend who may not even know your name. Beautiful! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed the connection is great my friend. . . wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Suthern, Sven....thank you both! |
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