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Freedom is a Gift of Love
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Freedom is a Gift of Love |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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(reposted for a friend) Freedom is a Gift of Love Where has that glistening gone that beckoned me to take that narrow precarious trail across the mountain with its charming? How it whispered like wings in the distant appeal of a river’s song, come and play this dancing water that waits near the precipice, it said. How the sound soothed this withering. I tore this satin skin in the winding and was lost, the trail behind me swallowed by the feelings that fell from me like tattered leaves. Now that I have come so far I can see just beyond the rise, the road paved with your sweet waiting. This freedom is a gift of love. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie, your friend is a fortunate person to have you in their life...this is lovely...what a song! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"I can see just beyond the rise, the road paved with your sweet waiting. This freedom is a gift of love." and there'll be smooth going frome here on Loved this Martie  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, I do so enjoy your writing. Sy |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
"This freedom is a gift of love." *sighs* this is just so beautiful! i always enjoy reading your work and this was certainly no exception. this has just such a lovely and tender meaning to it...made me smile. thank you for sharing this w/ all of us. take care. amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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