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The Whisper
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The Whisper |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
The deed done is wrong, but it brought peace. The tension was strong, that caused the whisper. Promising not to give in, hard not to do the reckless act. The whisper wins. Red-uni (C) 2/00 |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
All that stress and contrast in so few lines. Wakes my minimalist bent. Thanks for sharing. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This poem is cool! You said it in just a few simple words.  Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ahh, yes..Too many times has the whisper won me over. I really liked this, Red. |
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