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Kethry
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0 posted 2001-02-23 07:00 AM



Some people placed on earth
Will show their heart and care
In fulfilling their birth promise
They are angels unaware
Angel's unaware touching hither, yon
Reducing every care, gifting hearts with song

Some people have been gifted
With a strong drive to advise
To lift and meet the helpless
See life through their eyes
When promise is fulfilled, with people moving on
All doubts and fears are stilled the battle has been won

Some people now and then
Can touch and heal another
They offer strength to raise, empower
And treat all as a brother
And neighborly love, so strong
Creates a gift from heaven above, the hum of angel song





Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



© Copyright 2001 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-02-23 07:14 AM


Keth....angels come in many forms, and you have many forms about you...
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-02-23 08:05 AM


Kethry~
A great big Amen !

I so enjoy the thoughts you maintain.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2001-02-23 08:23 AM


I love the title..and also the thoughts that are derived from it..huggzz


~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Marsha
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4 posted 2001-02-23 08:24 AM


Kethry dear heart truly utterly beautiful, I really love this one. (Now no slacking you missy, get back to the grindstone, and don't forget the next one has my name on it!) Because I really and truly do wish I'd written this love. (And you know I would've done, should've done and could've done, if only!!)
Absolutely fabulous dear heart, excellent work
Take care love as always
Slushy


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Elizabeth
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5 posted 2001-02-23 09:18 AM


Kethry, I wish I had written this one too! This is just wonderful....I love the thoughts in it.
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6 posted 2001-02-23 11:10 AM


thank you Kethry, I needed this today.....

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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7 posted 2001-02-23 10:52 PM


Nice compliment, Kethry. Thanks for the write.
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8 posted 2001-02-23 10:55 PM


Kethry~ just wonderful........I love this! SEA
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9 posted 2001-02-24 03:10 AM


A wonderful write my friend!

"I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2001-02-24 03:37 AM


Enjoyed this poem Kethry....James
ethome
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11 posted 2001-02-24 03:40 AM


So true Kethry! This is a great write! I love the thoughts so very much!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Kethry
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12 posted 2001-02-24 06:05 AM


Sunshine thanks,
you are right I do have many forms about me... let's see there's the tax evasion (err exemption form, the application for birth certificate form, the I can't be bothered filling this out form, the...you get the picture.

Marge, thank you my friend. Maintainence is my game.

Wynter, Thank you. Yes I seem to have derisive err derivative mind.

Marsha, Thank you dear one, you have enough things with your name on them...your hat, your dress, your sock right and left....

Elizabeth, thank you. High praise indeed.

Kathleen, Thank you friend. I'm glad I could provide what you needed in some small way.

Krawdad, your eyelashes and wings are fluttering. You are too kind.

SEA, Thanks. I am pleased that you enjoyed it.

Eagle One, Thank you so much for the wonderful. you are pretty wonderful yourself.

James, thank you for stopping by and responding.

ethome, picnic partner, thank you how did you know I was starving for compliments.

Be real and feel
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Cerenity
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13 posted 2001-02-25 02:41 PM


Hi Kethry,

Im hearing music with this beauty and the flutter of wings caring to the heavens to sing,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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14 posted 2001-02-27 04:41 PM


This is beautiful, Kethry... I know I often neglect to thank those who lift my spirits without even realizing they do so... your poem has captured the importance of those angels. *S* Well done!
Aimster
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15 posted 2001-02-27 07:50 PM


kethry~

this is touching and so beautiful. you
were an Angel to post something like
this...beautiful message, lovely poem!

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


walker
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16 posted 2001-02-27 08:16 PM


Very beautiful and soothing to read. Thank you!
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