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Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-02-27 10:11 AM

Swirling emotions
Captured in filigree lace
Bury deep my thoughts

To be white again
Has one ever seen warm snow
Cover me with love

Blizzard me away
To our nest beneath the quilts
Love me all this day

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2001-02-27 11:29 AM

Love these, especially the last one...Well done!

Poeminister

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-02-27 03:02 PM

soft and warm thoughts *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

3 posted 2001-02-27 03:38 PM

simple and beautiful, I liked this! AP

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-02-27 03:39 PM

warm snow...what a beautiful thought.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-02-27 07:13 PM

Wow-just wonderful, I really love these senryus, very creative!~

Take care,
Melissa~

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

6 posted 2001-02-27 08:38 PM

Lovely in essence
and drawing from within one
moment gives heart true

Well done within the form]

three is better said
a mere and wondering one
who hears does know you

"For al these things, honor, dishonor, pain... happen to all men. They are not the mark of a virtuous life... or lack thereof" Marcus Aurelius

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

7 posted 2001-02-28 09:02 AM

Thank you all for your wonderful comments...

Mote
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 31

8 posted 2001-02-28 09:14 PM

Lovely Senryu.

Mote

SEA