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Where the sky ends and Heaven begins
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Where the sky ends and Heaven begins |
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Maverick Wolf Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94Scandia, MN |
To journey to the end of the Earth To walk to the end of life It is the place of dreams Where the sky ends and Heaven begins To go beyond To push the limits To be free from all that binds Where the sky ends and Heaven begins To go beyond all that we can sense To do the impossible To be free from the mind Where the sky ends and Heaven begins To end the emotional ties To be free to be A place without expectations Where the sky ends and Heaven begins God Bless Yesterday's history, tomorrow's a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why they call it the present. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely thoughts...beautifully penned. Poeminister "life is the Childhood of our immortality" --Goethe |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I enjoyed this..and it's got a good lesson!  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely place to think about, where the sky ends and heaven begins. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I do so enjoy poetry with messages, thank you. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this is really beautiful! really enjoyed reading this...love the way you wove this together, nice write! take care amy  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
I even love the idea... where the sky ends and heaven begins. Wonderful. "Close your eyes, and you'll see. Cover your ears, and you'll hear." |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Nicely put Jason. "To end all the emotional ties" Sometimes it sounds so nice.. where the skies end and the heavens begin.. thats where you'll find me! nice job."Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Maverick Wolf Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 94Scandia, MN |
Thank you all so much. I'd really hope you like the idea Alice, after all, you gave it to me. Glad you all enjoyed it. Yesterday's history, tomorrow's a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why they call it the present. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
bump |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Maverick Wolf, Neatly done! Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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