Open Poetry #12 |
How to write a letter to the one you love ( My 1,000 post! woo hoo!) |
Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Dear you, Do you ever feel like crying when the sun comes up and I'm not there? Do you ever wonder what I'm dreaming about across the sea in my own bed while not with you? Do you stop and think about how amazing it is that you and I can be so incredibly compatible? I do. So the question is, how do I write a letter to the one I love? Do I tell him he makes my toes curl? No no... I'll tell him my tongue twists around his name tying it's self into love knots. I'll tell him about the fact that dreaming doesn't compare to the real thing. How do you write a letter to the onw who loves you? I don't think you can, you just have to love him back. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Saxoness, I love the last line, so true Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Congratulations you sweet thing! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Angela...this is amazing. I agree, loving him back can be the best thing you can do. Congrats on the 1000 as well. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
That last line says it all. Nothing to do but that and enjoy every second of it when you do. CONGRATULATIONS on your 1000th post. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
The last line is so great and beautiful! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful. . . you always manage to see things that are hidden. . . and bring them to light. . . Congratulations!!!!! -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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