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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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 Swept Away Sweet splendor of silver light upon creamy mist of ocean night an enchanting trail in midnight hues crushing waves upon my breast in succulent waves of limpid blue silver threads anchor me to you, I rest my head in echoes of whispers upon your shoulders as a thousand stars sprinkle tender kisses, clinging in the desire of your arms I’m swept away in flames BloomingRose |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Enchanting descriptions, and imagery in this. Nicely written. Poeminister |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I have to say that this is a very splendid piece of writing, but this graphic that you added just caught me up in it, and the whole effect is sensational. (Especially since I would give anything to be on that nice warm beach right about now, instead of the middle of an Alaskan blizzard!!!) Thanks for the warm thoughts and images, my friend!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Poe~ Thank you kindly  Sunny~ So glad this gave you a bit of sunshine! Sorry you have to be in a blizzard. I live in Florida and have never been in blizzard conditions, so I can only imagine how cold this must be... I heard Alaska is beautiful |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in succulent waves of limpid blue silver threads anchor me to you, I rest my head in echoes of whispers upon your shoulders as a thousand stars sprinkle tender kisses, ================== Deb, this is stunning...both the imagery and the passion of the emotions.. beautiful peaceful sensual writing very well done poetess In the evening when you see my eyes Looking back at you no disguise Im not sure who you think youll see Im just hoping youll still know that its me |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Cheeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzz.....look who just blossomed all over the page in poetic splendor. Who says that water will extinquish a flame? I think you just proved that one wrong in a thousand ways. Very lovely images born in this one my poetic friend and I loved the cadence in this beautiful piece. Library time for this one. |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
I love the presentation, the color, and the passion of the sea...charming work, Rose! Robert Joseph |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I rest my head in echoes of whispers upon your shoulders as a thousand stars sprinkle tender kisses, clinging in the desire of your arms I’m swept away in flames' Ummm...all I can say is whoa....this is outrageous...gives me a wonderful image! I absolutely love this!! Great graphic, too! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Delightful reading! So well done and sensual...good work!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
JM~ Thank you sweet lady. Mark~ Since this was written near Valentines Day, I suppose love was in the air  Robert~ Thank you. The power in the ocean is indeed a moving force with great passion in every way, especially with the moon watching.  Snowpants~ Thank you! You must love the moon too. Ahhhh that light that shines! Poe~  Thanks!ethome~ Thanks so much |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
A well written poem, and by the way the beach is my favorite place. Thanks, for the post. Red |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
this was/is beautiful...... Robert |
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