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Mystic Moons (Challenge - Thanks SEA!)
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Mystic Moons (Challenge - Thanks SEA!) |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Mystic Moons, guide my way through memories that seem to stay and sadness veiled across my eyes for all the questions, all the why's Help me see further than one day Paint a horizon beyond the gray Somewhere that my heart can see when all the tears are blinding me Mystic Moons, alight my night within the darkness, gentle light while change is dancing in the winds as old life fades and new begins "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautifully done...and congrats on 400! Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Oh my gosh! I didn't even realize I was close to 400! Thank you!  "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a wonderful write...very very good! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow....now see....THAT is what I wanted to do with that phrase! Love this! Thank you for doing this! library bound for sure  SEA |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Enjoyed this poem very much, could relate to it. |
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