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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-25 09:31 AM

This love of mine,
it's crazy. It's an
obsessive love.
I just can't walk
away, from your addictive touch.
It's then I realize,
that all I need is YOU.
You when I rise, You are my sun.
You when I cry, You are my pain.
You when I smile, You are my joy.
And in our long hours of passion.
I realize again, that all I need is YOU.
You in my silence, you're with me.
You in my goodtimes, that You give.
You with your love, You let me be.
You only You, it's all I need.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-02-25 09:58 AM

Hey, I been there before. Wonderful piece of love here and you have a great way of showing your heart and the longing that lingers when even one moment passes between time of seperation from the one you need to be with. Great write.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2001-02-25 09:59 AM

Walker,
This is wonderful to read!!
It's so full of sincerity and tender feelings....very much enjoyed this poem!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 02-25-2001).]

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-02-25 01:47 PM

walker,

What a beautiful way to profess your love for someone special. This was soft and sweet. Very nice writing.

Lone Wolf

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2001-02-25 02:13 PM

walker-

very lovely and touching poem. a
wonderful way to say "i love you".
truly enjoyed reading this.

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."

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